BEFORE YOU READ: |
1. Think of a flower, the rose, and of an animal, the worm, and
say what image they convey to your mind, or what symbols they suggest to you. |
"O rose, thou art sick"
O rose, thou (1) art (2) sick:
The invisible worm
That flies in the night,
In the howling storm,
Has found out thy (3) bed
Of crimson joy;
And his dark secret love
Does thy life destroy.
(William Blake, Songs of Experience)
Notes:
1. thou: you.
2. art: are.
3. thy: your.
ANALYSIS
1. Read the poem aloud and identify its rhyme scheme.
2. Who is addressed in the poem?
3. Who is the speaker?
4. The poet addresses the rose in the opening line, and soon after its destroyer. Quote from the text.
5. Look up the two words "rose" and "worm" in your monolingual dictionary and write out their denotations.
Rose: .......................................................................
Worm: .......................................................................
6. List in juxtaposition the lines and the words which describe the rose and the worm in the poem.
7. Do The Rose and The Worm suggest anything beyond themselves?
8. Give example of what the rose and worm suggest to you. Then comment on the symbolic associations of meanings and connotations that the Rose and the Worm have in our culture.
Rose: ......................................................................
Worm: ......................................................................
Connotations
a) The rose ................................................................
b) The worm ................................................................
9. If we just consider that the worm is male and the rose female, what is the consistent interpretation of the poem?
10. As symbols the rose and the worm are images so loaded with significance that is not simply literal, and it does not simply stand for something else. They are both themselves and something else that they richly suggest, a kind of manifestation of something too complex or too elusive to be otherwise revealed. Blake's poem is about a blighted rose and at the same time about much more. The short poem "The Sick Rose" can be read at two levels: a superficial level and a deeper level. Substantiate.
11. Consider the poem "The Sick Rose" in the plan of Blake's Songs of Innocence and of Experience and comment on the meaning of the two symbols, the rose and the worm.
THE FLY
The Illustration
Songs of Innocence and Experience, we know, is an anthology of poetry and painting. In the illustration accompanying this poem, under the text, a mother, or a nursemaid, teaches her child to walk, holding both his hands. Behind her, on the background, a little girl is playing battledore, a volleying game played with a shuttlecock and rackets. On the mother's left is a barren trunk of a tree. The shuttlecock was no doubt intended to suggest the "Fly". The little boy is in the illustration only.
"The Fly" is one of Blake's most popular lyrics, but at the same time an elusive little poem. The three human figures, who dominate the lower part of the design under the written poem, appear to be engaging in innocent activities. The little girl playing the harmless game of shuttlecock is with her back turned toward the reader. The barren tree with a serpentine root is on the reader's right. the lowest bough of this tree follows the curve of the woman's back, so tending to cut off the mother and her child from the girl, who plays a game requiring two players by herself. There is also a barren young tree in the other margin that arches above the whole left side of the design and then falls unnaturally between the two columns of the poem until it crosses a higher branch of the lowest limb of the barren tree on the right. A cloud in the sky covers the top of the picture from the lower limb of the tree on the right to the young tree on the left. It forms a background for the girl from the waist up, including her right arm and right forearm. The ground is divided into two slopes. A distant bird is flying above the complex lower limb of the tree on the right near the ends of the last two lines of text. The dividing serpentine device seems to imply a pictorial criticism of the action and reasoning of the unknown speaker of the poem. The large tree may be interpreted as a symbolic tree of death, or the dead tree of materialism. The chief implications of the design are not optimistic. The union of these two trees seems a parody of the union of trees like that depicted in the design of "The Lamb".
BEFORE YOU READ
1. Look up the word "fly" in your monolingual dictionary and write out its definition.
"Little fly"
Little fly,
Thy summer's play
My thoughtless (1) hand
Has brushed away.
Am not I
A fly like thee?(2)
Or art not thou (3)
A man like me?
For I dance
And drink and sing,
Till some blind hand
Shall brush my wing.
If thought is life
And strength and breath,
And the want(4)
Of thought is death;
Then am I
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die.
Notes:
1. thoughtless: i. e. "unreflecting" as well as careless.
2. thee: (archaic) you.
3. art not thou: (archaic) are you not.
4. want: lack.
ANALYSIS
Style
1. Read the whole poem and identify number of its stanzas and the lines in each stanza.
2. Focus your attention on the first two stanzas only and decide who the speaker is.
3. Identify the metre of the poem.
4. What is the effect of trochees as regards the tone of the poem?
5. Identify the rhyme scheme pattern.
6. Analyse the stress pattern od the first stanza.
Close Reading
7. Now paraphrase each stanza explaining the literal meaning when necessary.
Stanza I: ...................................................................
Stanza II: ..................................................................
Stanza III: .................................................................
Stanza IV: ..................................................................
Stanza V: ...................................................................
8. Consider the whole poem again and divide it into tree parts, according to its content, by grouping the stanzas.
First Part: .................................................................
Second Part: ................................................................
Third Part: .................................................................
9. In stanza III the speaker compares himself and the Fly with respect to:
[] their importance
[] their mortality
10. In the fourth stanza the poet states what life and death are. Substantiate.
Life is ....................................................................
Death is ...................................................................
11. How might be further paraphrased the movement of the speaker's mind from the opening line to the closing one of stanza 4?
12. The fifth stanza present the speaker's philosophical conclusion of the poem. Substantiate.
13. What is the central idea in "The Fly?"
[] cruelty
[] human mortality
14. You have probably decided at the beginning of this analysis that the speaker in the poem is the poet himself. In the light of the meaning of the poem decide whether the speaker is:
[] Blake the poet;
[] Blake the Prophet;
[] Blake the man;
[] A man in Experience.
Figures of speech
15. The speaker's hypotheses are expressed in metaphors, similes, and paradoxes. Identify these figures of speech and quote fromthe text.
Metaphors: .................................................................
Similes: ...................................................................
Paradoxes: .................................................................
16. In Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience Blake analyses the two contrary states of human souls by means of contrary poems. Can you find any hint at the two contrary states, "Innocence" and "Experience" within this same poem.
THE LITTLE BLACK BOY
BEFORE YOU READ:
1. Do prejudices against black people still exist? What is your personal view about this problem?
2. Imagine a conversation between two little boys, a black child and a white one; what would they talk about?
"My mother bore me in the southern wild"
My mother bore me in the southern wild,
And I am black, but oh, my soul is white;
White as an angel is the English child,
But I am black as if bereaved (1) of light.
My mother taught me underneath (2) a tree,
And sitting down before the heat of day
She took me on her lap and kissed me,
And pointing to the east began to say:
"Look on the rising sun: there God does live
And gives his light, and gives his heat away;
And flowers and trees and beasts and men receive
Comfort in morning joy in the noon day.
"And we are put on earth a little space,(3)
That we may learn to bear the beams of love,
And these black bodies and this sun-burnt face
Is but a cloud, and like a shady grove.
"For when our souls have learned the heat to bear
The cloud will vanish, we shall hear his voice,
Saying: "come out from the grove, (4) my love and care,
And round my golden tent like lambs rejoice." "
Thus (5) did my mother say, and kissed me;
And thus I say to little English boy:
When I from black and he from white cloud free
And round the tent of God like lambs we joy,
I'll shade him from the heat till he can bear
To lean in joy upon our Father's knee;
And then I'll stand and stroke his silver hair,
And be like him and he will then love me.
(William Blake, Songs of Innocence.)
Notes:
1. bereaved: deprived, dispossessed.
2. underneath: under, sheltered by.
3. little space: for a short time.
4. grove: a small wood, or a group of trees.
5. Thus: so, in this way.
ANALYSIS
Style
1. Read the whole poem and say how many stanzas is the poem made up of.
2. How many lines are there in each stanza?
3. Who is the speaker of the poem? Substantiate.
4. Identify the rhyme scheme pattern.
COMMENTARY.
The poem is illuminated by two illustrations. In the first illustration there is "The Little Black Boy" sitting at his mother's knees and talking to her. They are both sitting under a curved tree, "before the heat of the day", (stanza 2) and looking towards the rising sun. In the second illustration the two boys stand before God personified as Christ, the Good Shepherd, with his crook. He sits beside a stream with a willowy tree arching over his head surrounded with a halo, the traditional religious circle of light surrounding the head of Christ, while the water and the vegetation indicate that heaven may be found upon earth (stanza 7).
In the first stanza the "Little Black Boy" seems to regret the blackness of his face and his body, because it hides the purity of his soul, "I am black, but oh, my soul is white" (l. 2); on the contrary the English child is white both inside and outside, "White as an angel is the English child" (l. 3). In stanza 2, which is illuminated by the design above the poem, the "Little Black Boy"'s mother is looking at the rising sun and explains how God gives warmth and comfort to to all living things by the light of the sun (stanza 3, ll. 9-12). Their black bodies are only a temporary cloud, a protection, even, from the extreme heat and light of the Sun God (stanza 4, ll. 13-16). But then the cloud will vanish and they will hear the voice of God calling them, who are His favourite, to Him, :"Come out from the grove, my love and care, / And round my golden tent like lambs rejoice." (stanza 5, ll. 19-20). The "Little Black Boy" receives his mother's kiss and is encouraged by her words; he picks up her mother's message and explains it to the English child: they are really both the same, each being clouded by his body until he reaches a spiritual state of joy "And round the tent of God" they "joy" (stanza 6). In the end the "Little Black boy" feels he is the stronger of the two, therefore he will help and guard the white boy until they love one another as equals: "And then I'll stand and stroke his silver hair,/And be like him and he will then love me" (stanza 7, ll. 27-28).
In the last stanza (ll. 25-28) the "Little Black Boy"'s innocence is deeply touching, as he imagines himself and the little English boy together. The "Little Black Boy" will "shade" the white boy "from the heat till he can bear/To lean in joy upon our Father's knee." (ll. 25-26).
The spirit of the poem seems to suggest that if only white and black could live together with this kind of open goodwill, the hatred and bitterness of racial prejudice would disappear. "In this way Blake's "Innocence" becomes the most powerful commentary imaginable upon a stale and war-torn adult world. The eyes of the children look out upon a stale and worn-torn adult world. The eyes of the children look out upon a society which is corrupt, vicious, and unjust, and their very trust is itself a denunciation".
Despite the optimistic point of view that Blake gives to the conclusion of the poem the reader perceives the underlying reality of social injustice which at the poet's time was represented by the indecent practice of the slave trade. The last line of the poem, "And be like him, and he will then love me" captures the sadness of the prejudice experienced by the victims of the racial injustice. In fact, the poem was written in the spirit of contemporary anti-slavery writing. To some extent it was inspired by contemporary indignation both against slavery and the supposed inferiority of black races. At the same time the teaching of the poem is that the creation of the world was an act of divine mercy, by which man might become accustomed to endure the heat of divine love.
BEFORE YOU READ
1. What images do you associate with the words of the title of this poem, "The Garden of Love"?
2. Compare your findings with the poet's vision.
"I went to the Garden of love"
I went to the Garden of love,
And saw what I never had seen:
A chapel was built in the midst,
Where I used to play on the green.
And the gates of this chapel were shut,
And Thou shalt not writ over the door;
So I turned to the garden of love,
That so many sweet flowers bore,
And I saw it was filled with graves,
And tomb-stones where flowers should be—
And priests in black gowns were walking their rounds,
And binding with briars (1) my joys and desires.
(William Blake, Songs of Experience.)
Notes:
1. briars: briers: any prickly bush especially of a wild rose.
COMMENTARY
The poem is illuminated with a design above the text. It shows a priest in monk's robes, with shaven head, who kneels with his prayer-book, and young people kneel behind him. The priest is seen instructing a boy and a girl in his doctrines. Below, the grave-mound of "joys and desires" is seen bound with briars.
The Garden of love should be a place where flowers, symbols of love, usually blossom. In the opening stanza Blake's thought now turns to a garden where love would be naturally found, the garden he always associated with happiness, where he had played in a state of innocence. But this garden is now occupied by the Chapel of negation, the command written over its door is forbidding: "Thou shalt not" (l.6). The door is closed to visitors. As Blake wrote in "The Chapel of Gold", "I saw a chapel all of gold / That none did dare to enter in;/And many weeping stood without, /Weeping mourning, worshipping." The chapel built in the garden of love is surrounded by the graves of instincts (l. 9). The chapel is built by the priests,(l. 3) who wish to contain the true joys of life, (l. 4) and to keep the key in their own power.(ll. 5-6) The priest of organized religion is the agent of repression. Blake accuses the Church of emphasizing the negative letter of the law, of interfering in a negative manner with morality. The innocence of true love and happiness has been corrupted by the imposition of negative Experience. As in the poem "London", writes the critic D. Daiches, "Cruelty, hypocrisy, poverty, misuse of the intellect, distrust of the imagination, political and ecclesiastical institutions, frustration of desire, are associated evils which combine to corrupt and destroy." The changed rhythm of the last two lines (ll. 11-12) "provides a note both haunting and sinister, also evidenced in the repetition of "And" (ll. 9-12) and the explosive consonant sounds of the whole last stanza.
NURSE'S SONG (I)
The Illustration and the Poem
The illustration on the plate shows the nurse sitting and watching the children dancing merrily in a ring, under the text and the lower branch of a tree. The weeping willow in the right-hand margin is perhaps a reminder that not all life is fun and game.
This poem is composed of four stanzas. It expresses with perfect simplicity the happy irresponsibility of childhood. It is said that few besides Blake could have written such a successful poem on the delight of being allowed to play a little longer until dusk.
"When the voices of children are heard on the green"
When the voices of children are heard on the green(1)
And laughing is heard on the hill,
My heart is at rest within my breast
And everything else is still.
"Then come home my children, the sun is gone down
And the dews (2) of night arise
Come home leave off play, and let us away
Till the morning appears in the skies."
"No, no, let us play, for it is yet day
And we cannot go to sleep;
Besides, in the sky the little birds fly
And the hills are all covered with sheep."
"Well, well, go and play till the light fades away
And then go home to bed."
The little ones leaped (3) and shouted & laugh'd
And all the hills echoed.
(Taken from: W.Blake, Songs of Innocence.)
Notes:
1. green: a common grassy area where children play.
2. dews: atmospheric vapour condensing in small drops on cool surfaces at night.
3. leaped: jumped.
ANALYSIS
Stylistic features
1. Read the first stanza of the poem and identify the speaking voice.
2. Read on stanzas 2-3-4 and say whether you notice any differences in the layout of the poem on the page.
3. What does the presence of inverted commas reveal?
4. Consider the structure of the whole poem and decide which stanzas and lines are written in dramatic form, and which ones are narrative and descriptive.
5. Is the speaker of stanzas 2-3-4 (lines 5-14) the same as in stanza 1?
6. Are there more than one speakers? Identify them.
7. Determine the form of stanzas 2-3-4, (line 5-14).
8. Who is the speaker in lines 15-16?
9. Determine the rhyme scheme of the poem.
10. Read the whole poem aloud and identify its internal rhymes. Quote from the text.
Line 1: .............................................................
Line 2: .............................................................
Line 3: .............................................................
Line 4: .............................................................
Line 5: .............................................................
Line 6: .............................................................
Line 7: .............................................................
Line 8: .............................................................
Line 9: .............................................................
Line 10: ............................................................
Line 11: ............................................................
Line 12: ............................................................
Line 13: ............................................................
Line 14: ............................................................
Line 15: ............................................................
Line 16: ............................................................
Close Reading: Stanza 1.
11. What is the poet describing in the first stanza?
12. Blake is describing a pastoral setting which brings him peace. Quote phrases and words which point out the poet's reaction.
Spontaneity/content |
Peace/order |
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13. Comment on the effect the scene which is being described in stanza one has on the poet.
Stanza 2
14. What happens in the second stanza?
Stanza 3
15. What's the children's reaction?
Stanza 4
16. What is the reaction of the nurse?
17. As you have seen the state of "Innocence" perceived throughout the poem is described through words involving the senses. The children are happy and convey a feeling of joy. Specify.
18. List the auditory and visual elements in the table below.
Auditory elements |
Visual elements |
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19. The poem is also based on a series of contrasting images. Give examples.
20. Does nature share the children's joy? Substantiate your answer.
21. This is a poem of the "Innocence" collection. What images do you associate with the innocent playing of the children?
NURSE'S SONG
BEFORE YOU READ
1. In the Innocence "Nurse's Song" Blake has presented the joys of childhood, symbol of imagination, creative power, innocence and purity, in a a natural and protected world, which is a vision of innocence. What do you expect Blake to depict in the correspondent Experience "Nurse's Song"?
2. Compare your predictions with Blake's scenes.
The Illustration and the Poem
The illustration shows a doorway framed in grape-clustered vines and an adolescent boy who is allowing his hair to be combed by the nurse; we are to assume his repressed resentment of the woman's power over him and his secret resolution to rebel. A girl, probably his more docile sister sits quietly behind him. The evil of female domination, so destructive of the male personality, already explicit in this poem, was often in Blake's mind, as we know from passages in other writings. The cottage door from which the boy has come is conspicuously wreathed with vines, symbol of the pleasures he will find in life.
This song is a parody of the contrary poem in Songs of Innocence. The difference is emphasized by the form of the title "NURSES Song" ("Songs of Experience") instead of "Nurses Song" ("Songs of Innocence"). In this poem the words are spoken only by the nurse. The children, with their "whisperings in the dale", are no longer real children, but are adolescents aware of sex. The nurse recalls with regret how she wasted her spring-time without real gratification, and tells the "children" that their winter and night will be spoiled by repression and hypocrisy. Her face turns "green and pale" (l. 4) because that is traditionally the colour of the sex-starved spinster, sick with longings for experiences which will never be hers.
"When the voices of children are heard on the green"
When the voices of children are heard on the green
And whisperings are in the dale,(1)
The days of my youth rise fresh in my mind,
My face turns green and pale.
Then come home, my children, the sun is gone down,
And the dews of night arise:
Your spring & and your day are wasted in play,
And your winter and night in disguise.(2)
(Taken from: William Blake, Songs of Experience.)
Notes:
1. dale: valley.
2. disguise: the concealment of reality; false appearances and hypocrisy.
JUXTAPOSED ANALYSIS
Stylistic features
1. Read the whole the poem and identify the narrating voice.
2. Compare the two poems, the Innocence and Experience "Nurse's Song" and say whether you notice any differences in the layout of the poem on the page.
3. Is the Experience "Nurse's Song" dramatic in structure?
4. Juxtapose the speakers that appear in both poems.
1. Innocence "Nurse's Song" |
Experience "Nurse's Song |
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5. Determine the structure of the poem.
6. Determine the rhyme scheme pattern of the poem, and say whether it is different from the pattern of the Innocence "Nurse's Song".
7. Read the whole poem aloud and identify internal rhymes. Quote from the text.
Line 1: .............................................................
Line 2: .............................................................
Line 3: .............................................................
Line 4: .............................................................
Line 5: .............................................................
Line 6: .............................................................
Line 7: .............................................................
Line 8: .............................................................
Close Reading: Stanza 1.
8. What is the Nurse recollecting in stanza 1? Paraphrase.
Stanza 2.
9. What is the Nurse's comment in stanza 2? Paraphrase.
10. What do lines 7 and 8 really mean?
11. Which stages of human life do "winter" and "night" represent?
12. Concentrate your attention on the first two lines of the poem and say what the words "voices" (l. 1) and "whisperings" reveal.
13. Focus you attention on the Nurse, the narrating voice. What feelings does she express?
14. Which words reveal the nurse is showing regret about having spent a life without real gratification?
15. This poem of "Experience" is the direct counterpart to the poem of "Innocence" of the same title. Read the first stanza and list the expressions which reveal the changed atmosphere, the passage from the world of Innocence into Experience. Read the first stanza and quote the phrases expressing this change.
16. Compare "Nurse's Song" II with "Nurse's Song" I and say what they have in common in their literal from. Quote from the texts.
17. Compare the internal rhymes you have identified in both poems, and determine in which one they carry negative associations of meaning. Substantiate your answer.
18. The second line of this poem contains a couple of images opposed to the corresponding line in poem I. Juxtapose the words.
1. Innocence "Nurse's Poem" |
Experience "Nurse's Poem |
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19. Blake usually presents symbols of psychological states. Which of the words from line 1 and 2 quoted above stand for the innocent joy of childhood, and which for the sorrowful experience of maturity?
Joy |
Sadness |
l. 1: ................................
l. 2:................................. |
l. 1: ................................
l. 2:.................................
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20. The two poems themselves may be considered as symbols of psychological states and ages in man's life. Substantiate.
1. Innocence "Nurse's Poem" |
Experience "Nurse's Poem |
age:...................
symbol:................
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age:.....................
symbol:................. |
21. In the same way find and juxtapose all the other words in both poems which symbolize the two "contrary states of human soul."
Innocence( "Nurse's Poem" 1) |
Experience ("Nurse's Poem" 2) |
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22. In the Innocence "Nurse's Song" nature seems to share the joyous voices and play of the children. Does nature share this vision of innocence in the Experience "Nurse's Song"? Substantiate.
23. What has happened to the vision of innocence depicted in the first "Nurse's Song?" What is Experience associated with?
Figures of Speech
24. The world of Experience is more complex the the world of Innocence. Through which figures of speech does Blake express the symbolism of his view in the Experience "Nurse's Song?"
25. What do the figures of speech you have listed stand for in Blake's symbolism? Juxtapose them with their meaning.
THE CHIMNEY SWEEPER (I)
The Illustration and the poem
The illustration is at the bottom of the page, under the text of the poem, and shows an Angel unlocking a coffin and a group of boys rejoicing in their freedom. "The Chimney Sweeper" is related to the earlier poem "The Little Black Boy" and concentrates on serious social problems of Blake's own time. Children are shown in a state of exploitation by society or neglected by adults. The innocent way in which children look out upon their society, and the innocence they display are an effective denunciation of a corrupt and unjust society. The poem is clearly inspired by indignation against the shameful use of small boys, called at Blake's time "climbing boys", for sweeping chimneys. The white boy is blackened by the soot of human cruelty. The usual age at which children became sweeps, or apprentices, was six or seven, but some did so at five or even four. They were brutally and unscrupulously used by their masters, not clothed,fed or washed; they kept them worse than animals.The children were in constant danger of suffocation or burning when sweeping, and the soot which was literally never washed from their bodies caused the cancer of the scrotum. They were encouraged to steal, and were often turned out in the streets by their masters to "cry the streets" on the chance of employment, or for mere begging; their dirt and their reputation for stealing made them social outcasts. Most lines of the poem are literally true.
"When my mother died I was very young"
When my mother died I was very young,
And my father sold me (1) while yet my tongue
Could scarcely cry "weep weep," "weep weep"!
So your chimneys I sweep, and in soot I sleep.
There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head,
That curled like a lamb's back, was shaved; so I said,
"Hush Tom, never mind it, for when your head's bare,
You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair."
And so he was quiet, and that very night,
as Tom was asleeping he had such a sight—
That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned, and Jack,
Were all of them locked up in coffins of black;(2)
And by came an angel, who had a bright key,
And he opened the coffins and set them all free;
Then down a green plain leaping, laughing they run,
And wash in a river and shine in the sun.
Then naked and white, all their bags (3) left behind,
They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind.
And the angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy,
He'd have God for his father and never want joy.(4)
And so Tom awoke, and we rose in the dark,
And got with our bags and our brushes to work.
Though the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm;
So if all do their duty, they need not fear harm.
(William Blake, Songs of Innocence.)
Notes:
1. sold me: a reference to the system of apprentices.
2. coffins of black: either literally black coffins, or, figuratively their mortal bodies clothed in the blackness of soot.
3. their bags: the bags in which they carried the soot they had collected and on which they slept.
4. never want joy: suffer from lack of joy.
THE CHIMNEY-SWEEPER (II)
The Illustration and the poem
This is the contrary poem of "The Chimney Sweeper" Songs of Innocence. The illustration portrays the chimney sweeper; it shows the boy with his bag of soot in the snow.
In the corresponding poem in Songs of Innocence the little chimney sweeper appears wholly miserable until he is released by the angel. In Songs of Experience the boy is still sometimes happy (ll. 5-6,9), but he tells his story of exploitation by his parents themselves, who think they are not treating him badly because he is not wholly subdued. They do not take care of him, they are in church (ll. 4, 11) since the Church condoned the society that exploited the children with such cruelty. The Establishment seems indifferent to the children's doom.
"A little black thing among the snow"
A little black thing among the snow
Crying "weep, weep", (1) in notes of woe!
Where are thy (2) father and mother, say?
"They are both gone up to the church to pray.
"Because I was happy upon the heath
And smiled among the winter's snow,
They clothed me in the clothes of death
And taught me to sing the notes of woe.
"And because I am happy and dance and sing,
They think they have done me no injury—(3)
And are gone to praise God and his priest and king,
Who make up a Heaven of our misery."(4)
(William Blake, Songs of Experience)
Notes:
1. 'weep, 'weep: sweep! It was the cry of the children sent out on the chance of getting work; it is also a pathetic pun; in fact "weep" means shed tears.
2. thy: (archaic) your.
3. injury: physical harm.
4. make up ... misery: they promise that they will be rewarded in Heaven for our pains in this world.
COMMENTARY
Poem 1
The poem is made up of six stanzas of four lines each, with regular rhyme scheme pattern: aabb, ccdd, etc. The speaker is the first person narrator "I", that is, the little child. In the first stanza the poem sketches, through the words of the young speaker, a brief biography of the sweeper. His mother died when he was very young, and his father apprenticed him to a sweep, before he could speak and cry "sweep, sweep"(ll. 1-3). In the second stanza he narrates the story of his friendship with another sweeper in his similar condition, Tom Dacre, whom he helped. Tom cried and was in great distress because he had been shaved completely bald; he comforted him by saying that at least he could never spoil his hair with soot: "Hush Tom, never mind it, for when your head's bare,/You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair." (ll. 7-8) The effect of the little chimney sweeper's consolation was that Tom fell asleep and slept well. In his sleep he dreamt that thousands of other little sweeper like him, "Dick, Joe, Ned, and Jack" (l. 11) were locked in black coffins. But in stanza 4 an angel came who had a a bright key and set all all of them free from their miserable plight. A vision of happiness followed: "The down a green plain leaping, laughing they run,/ And wash in a river and shine in the sun" (ll. 15-16. In the fifth stanza they all rose naked upon clouds driven by the wind, and the Angel promised Tom would be happy because he would have "God for his father" and would never suffer for lack of joy (l. 20). Tom's soul was filled with the angel's promise and when he awoke the next morning, he went willingly to work, "Though the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm" (l. 23)
Poem 2
This is a shorter poem, made up of three quatrains. The rhyme scheme is: aabb, caca, dede. The poem is written in dramatic form. The first two lines describe the sad condition of the little sweeper whop is looking for work; the third line is a question asking the child to say where his parents are. The child's answer is in lines 4-12, written between inverted commas. He says that his parents have both gone to church, where they are praying (l. 4). In the second stanza he explains that his parents punished him, "clothed me in the clothes of death" (l. 7), because he was happy "upon the heath" and "smiled among the winter's snow" (l. 6). He was taught the "notes of woe" (l. 8). His parents took advantage of him, but they think they have not done wrong to him, (l. 11) on the contrary they convince themselves they have done the right thing for him, since they are his parents. That's why they have "gone to praise God and his priest and king,/Who make up a Heaven of our misery" (ll. 11-12).
These two poems evoke intense picture of social injustice. In both poems the child is so little he can scarcely cry "sweep" "sweep". It is with terrible irony that the word come out "weep weep," "weep weep"!. The "Chimney Sweeper" 1 is a poem of Innocence, but the reader must ask where is the concept of innocence in a song like this that presents the terrible wrong and brutal exploitation perpetrated against children. The answer is to be found in Blake's vision that innocence can survive, miraculously, the most appallings conditions. In fact the little chimney sweeper does not complain at his condition. He is only interested in the dream in which "by came an angel, who had a bright key,/And he opened the coffins and set them all free" (ll.13-14).
There is no escape for the sweeper in the second poem, in contrast with "The Chimney Sweeper" 1, the poet describes the total helplessness of the child. The world of Experience is choking. The teaching of the day was the concept of duty, of accepting a way of life imposed by God's will, preached in every church. King and parents were the authorities who strictly followed this principle. The criticism of the parents who ought to have been caring for their child, but on the contrary have abandoned him, is introduced. There is also an implicit criticism of the Church, the representative of God, and the King and the Establishment (ll. 11-12), morally responsible for the social injustice. For this pains the children will be rewarded in Heaven.
FURTHER POEMS FOR READING AND
ANALYSIS
HOLY THURSDAY (I)
The Illustration
The text is illustrated by two designs, one above and one below. Both illustrations show children in procession. Blake describes an annual event in St. Paul's Cathedral, which he surely witnessed and. "Holy Thursday" is Ascension day. The event was the marching of some six thousand of the poorest children from the charity schools of London into St. Paul's guided by their beadles for a compulsory exhibition of their piety and gratitude to their patrons. Blake evidently felt the emotional effect of the singing of such a great number of children.
"'Twas on a Holy Thursday, their innocent faces clean"
'Twas on a Holy Thursday, their innocent faces clean,
The children walking two and two in red and blue and green;(1)
Grey-headed beadles (2) walked before with wands (3) as white as snow,
Till into the high dome of Paul's they like Thames water flow.
Oh, what a multitude they seemed, these flowers of London town!
Seated in companies they sit, with radiance all their own.
The hum (4) of multitudes was there, but multitudes of lambs,
Thousands of little boys and girls raising their innocent hands.
Now like a mighty wind they raise to heaven the voice of song,
Or like harmonious thunderings the seats of Heaven among.
Beneath them sit the aged men, wise guardians of the poor:
Then cherish pity, lest you drive an angel from your door.
(William Blake, Songs of Innocence.)
Notes:
1. red...green: There were charity schools, i. e. schools for poor and destitute children, whose children wore red, grey, blue and green; one wore orange.
2. beadles: ceremonial officers of a church.
3. wands: staffs symbolizing some officials' authority.
4. hum: humming, continuous sound.
HOLY THURSDAY (II)
The Illustration
There are three designs: one above the text and two on the right margin. The upper illustration shows a clothed woman, under a leafless tree, against a lakeland background, who looks down at the body of a child, probably the lifeless body of her infant. On the right of the text there are two scenes of poverty and death: there are children clinging at her mother, all weeping; in the bottom left corner there is the body of another child.
In this contrary poem Blake makes a more direct and powerful attack on the shameful presence of so much poverty "in a rich and fruitful land" (l.2).
"Is this a holy thing to see"
Is this a holy thing to see
In a rich and fruitful land—
Babes (1) reduced to misery,
Fed with cold and usurous hand?
is that trembling cry a song?
Can it be a song of joy—
And so many children poor?
It is a land of poverty!
And their sun does never shine,
And their fields are bleak (2) and bare,
And their ways are filled with thorns;
It is eternal winter there!
For wher'er (3) the sun does shine,
And wher'er the rain does fall,
Babe can never hunger there,
Nor poverty the mind appal.
(William Blake, Songs of Experience.)
Notes:
1. babes: (literary) babies.
2. bleak: dreary.
3. wher'er: wherever.
4. hunger: feel hunger.
5. appal: greatly horrify.
FACT AND SYMBOL
A reader of William Blake's two chimney sweeper songs needs little more information concerning eighteenth century "climbing boys" than the songs provide, in order to grasp their general humanitarian and symbolic significance. Yet familiarity with some additional details does, I think, help us see more clearly Blake's indictment of a society that allows children to be subjected to almost unbelievably wretched conditions, and it also gives more force and point to the symbolism. For in the songs Blake does not really describe the living and working conditions of the sweeps; he presupposes a knowledge of them. Writing at the time of the passage of the "Chimney Sweepers' Act" of 1788, when newspapers and reformers like Jonas Hanway were publicizing the treatment of the sweeps, Blake could depend on his readers' being aware of the facts in a way that modern readers are not. And he can therefore express his deep outrage obliquely and ironically, through the understated discourse of boys who, in the symbolic context of Songs of Innocence & of Experience, have somehow learned to preserve their humanity in circumstances that are all but completely dehumanizing. The details of chimney sweeping [...] do not, to be sure, reveal the poems in a new light. But a more sharply delineated picture of the lives of the sweeps than Blake's speakers in the poems can give strengthens our awareness of the ironic disparity between the tone of the boys' discourse and the conditions they allude to; it helps us to see some of the imagery of the poems a little more vividly; and it sets some badly needed limits on symbolic interpretations of the poems.
As any reader of Oliver Twist is aware, the boys were indeed boys, the smaller the better. When Blake's sweep of Innocence says,
When my mother died I was very young,
And my father sold me while yet my tongue
Could scarcely cry "'weep! 'weep! 'weep" 'weep!"
he is not exaggerating. Although the usual age at which children became sweeps, or apprentices, was six or seven, some did so at five or even four. And the world "sold" is to be taken quite literally. Unlike the usual apprenticeship, in which the fee is paid to the master, binding children—both boys and girls—to a master sweep usually brought a payment ranging from twenty shillings to five guineas from the master to the parent, if there was one, or to whoever had the child at the time. Ostensibly the child was apprenticed for seven years, after which he was usually too large to go up small chimneys; but after his apprenticeship he was by no means assured of a living as a journeyman, since there was not enough work to go around. Often he was left to the parish to support, not only because work was scarce but because he was physically unable to work. Chimney sweeping left children with kneecaps twisted and spines and ankles deformed, from crawling up chimneys as small as nine or even seven inches in diameter, with "chimney sweep's cancer" of the scrotum resulting from the constant irritation of the soot, with respiratory ailments, [illnesses] and eye inflammation.
Their living and working conditions were almost incredibly wretched. Although some masters took reasonably good care of their sweeps, most, to judge from evidence given before parliamentary committees and other contemporary sources, kept them worse than animals. Sweeps arose literally "in the dark" and worked until about noon, when they "cried the streets" for more business until it was time to return, carrying heavy bags of soot, to the cellars and attics where they slept, often not on mattresses or even straw but on the bags of soot they had swept. When Blake's sweep says "in soot I sleep," he is not talking metaphorically. Soot is his element day and night. Nor was there much relief from it, even temporarily, for sweeps often went without washing for six months.
(Martin K. Nurmi, "Fact and Symbol in "The Chimney Sweeper" of Blake's "Songs of Innocence", in Blake, A Collection of Critical Essays, Edited by Northrop Frye, Prentice Hall, 1966.)
A Poem in 2 Books
To Justify the Ways of God to Men
This narrative poem has four parts: 1) the Bard's song; 2) Milton's journey to self-renewal; 3) the journey of Ololon, Milton's emanation, seeking him; 4) a description of the works of Los, which is really a digression.
The starting-point of Blake's Milton is the poet's belief in the importance of the artist in national life. Milton had been the greatest, most inspired English poet, yet he had gone into error. The poet should show others the eternal world of imaginative truth, and act as a national seer and leader, but Milton had shown a false imagine of God as a law-giving tyrant beyond the clouds, not as a merciful brother among and in men. Blake's view was contrary to Milton's, that's why the poem Milton is an imaginary narrative describing how Milton's soul in heaven was purified, and how the malign influence of the old Milton was to be countered when the spirit of the new Milton descended, in another generation, to Blake himself.
As we have pointed out in portraying the Romantic Period and Blake's poetic vision of reality, the many social evils of the late eighteenth and early nineteenth centuries were the slave trade, the treatment of the poor, and the new growing threat of industrialization. In Milton Blake's "dark Satanic mills" represent the image of a society that grinds, crushes man himself. He wonders whether "was Jerusalem builded here / Among these dark Satanic mills?"
In the lines of this introduction Blake imagines that before the Fall England was a Holy Land and London a Holy City, the Jerusalem of the Bible. The Fall of man has separated them, and reduced London to the state in which London can be seen now. The phrase "dark Satanic mills" (l.25) describes London as a place of slavery. Blake's literary source for the us of "mill" is Milton's dramatic poem Samson Agonistes. The phrase which is usually considered a reference to the mills built for the new industrial factories, in Blake's vision refers to Satan's enslavement of the mind, ("The mind-forged manacles" of the song "London"); Satan is the origin of human error and Fall. The evils of the Industrial Revolution stress the presence of Satan with his dark mills in Albion (Britain, or England). That's why the Blake, the Prophet-Poet, says he will continue his "mental fight" (l. 30) "Till we have built Jerusalem,/ In England's green and pleasant land." (ll. 32-33).
Preface
The stolen and perverted writings of Homer and Ovid, of Plato and Cicero, which all men ought to contemn,(1) are set up by artifice (2) against the sublime of the Bible. But when the new age is at leisure to pronounce, all will be set right, & these grand works of the more ancient, and consciously & professedly inspired men, will hold their proper rank, & the daughters of memory (3) shall become the daughters of inspiration. Shakespeare & Milton were both curbed by the general malady & infection from the silly Greek & Latin slaves of the sword.(4)
Rouse up, O young men of the new age! Set your foreheads against the ignorant hirelings! (5) For we have hirelings in the camp, the court and the university, who would, if they could, for ever depress mental and prolong corporeal war. (6) Painters, on you I call! Sculpotors! Architects! Suffer not the fashionable fools (7) to depress your powers by the prices they pretend to give for contemptible works or the expensive advertising boasts that they make of such works; believe Christ & his apostles that there is a class of men whose whole delight is in destroying.(8) We do not want either Greek or Roman models, if we are but just & true to our own imaginations, those worlds of eternity in which we shall live for ever -- in Jesus our Lord.
And did those feet in ancient time
Walk upon England's mountains green?
And was the Holy Lamb of God
On England's pleasant pastures seen?
And did the Countenance Divine
Shine forth upon our clouded hills?
And was Jerusalem builded (9) here
Among these dark Satanic mills?
Bring me my bow of burning gold;
Bring me my arrows of desire;
Bring me my spear—O clouds, unfold!
Bring me my chariot of fire!(10)
I will not cease from mental fight,
Nor shall my sword sleep in my hand,
Till we have built Jerusalem,
In England's green and pleasant land.
Would to God that all the Lord's people were prophets!
Notes:
1. contemn: despise.
2. by artifice: artificially. They are not "naturally" the chief writings of the world.
3. daughters of memory: According to later Greek mythology, they were the nine Muses, the daughters of Mnemosyne, or memory.
4. slaves of the sword: Homer's and Virgil's epics dealt with war.
5. hirelings: persons who work for hire.
6. mental and prolong corporeal war: The first war is the creative strife of minds and ideas; the second is the destructive war of the arms.
7. fashionable fools: Ignorant patrons who admire art because it is is fashionable to do so.
8. a class of men ... destroying: a class of artists whose delight is the destruction of men.
9. Jerusalem builded: Was Jerusalem, the city of God, here, where Satan's mills now are?
10. chariot of fire: the chariot in which the prophet Elijah was carried to heaven.
STUDENT'S ESSAYS
1. Write a short essay discussing Blake's view of "Heaven" and "Hell", "Good"
and "Evil", and quote from his poems.
2. Compare Burns's poem "A Red, Red Rose", and Blake's "Sick Rose". First expound the two poems, then analyse their figures of speech and the symbolism they convey.
3. Compare and comment on Blake's two poems "The Lamb" and "The Tyger." Contrast Blake's views and attitudes in these two paired and contrary poems and say what Blake tries to emphasize by means of these contrasts.
4. Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience deals with two separate areas of content and symbolism. In this work the view is held that "Happiness turns to grief, and content to rebellion". Say to what extent this view suggests the main lines of development between the two groups of songs.
5. Write a short essay on the role of the child and childhood in Blake's Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience.
6. After describing the social and economic conditions of Blake's time, write a short essay on Blake as a critic of society and a poet of his time.
7. Comment in a short written essay Blake's figure as a religious and prophet poet.